Ming Ganoung
Tuesday, August 16, 2011
PLEASE Read My Poem "Late Night Studies"?
Vagueness is the key to a punchline that you used in the last stanza. I saw this coming. The good news is that the poem flows well and has some great images. Maybe a bit more esoteric would make the ending really pop. Overall, very nice.
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